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Directions 10
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the pictures；
2。 point out the reasons for this phenomenon； and
3。 give possible solutions。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
这篇文章的结构很清晰，可分为三段来写，分别是描述图画、说明原因和给出解决办法。
Sample：
In the first picture； a beggar says； “Have pity on me；please。 I am old。 I am blind。” In the second picture； he is eating to his heart’s content in a big restaurant。 He tells the waiter； “Another fish； please。” We can say he is in fact a man with bright eyes。
These two pictures remind us of such a group of people who don’t want to work to earn a living。 Instead； they disguise themselves as beggars to make easy money。 The reason for this phenomenon is rather obvious。 In such a society full of petitions； some people do not want to use their own hands to make a fortune。 They also can not bear a poor life； so they make such a shameful choice。
To solve this problem； the government and the mon people should join their hands。 On the one hand； the government should issue policies to take care of those people who are really in need of help。 Those fake beggars should be educated and punished in order that they give up begging and live a decent life。 On the other hand； mon citizens should also extend helping hands。 They should report such madeup beggars to the police as soon as possible。 If they can help such people learn skills； find jobs and live a normal life； it should be much better。
点评：
首段描述了两幅图画。
次段的前两句对图画所描述的群体做了总结——第一句话同时使用了remind。。。of。。。和who引导的定语从句，是个很好的模板句。第二句话以instead开头，凸显了对比。此句中有disguise oneself as（伪装为）和make easy money（轻松赚钱）两个词组，大家注意识记。之后对该现象做出了解释。
第三段给出了解决办法，从政府和公民两方面来说（段首的模板句清晰地表明了这一点），非常有条理。
心得：
首段的描述中要将两幅图画的对比描述出来。次段的图画总结和原因阐述采用了几乎相同的推导方式（不想工作——伪装骗钱；不想用辛勤劳动致富——做出了可耻的选择），看来有呼应之感觉。末段结构的层次感是由模板句奠定下来的，读来轻松流畅。
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Directions1
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the two pictures；
2。 interpret their meaning； and
3。 point out the reasons for such phenomenon。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
这道题包含两幅对比鲜明的图画，指令要求在描述图画后阐明含义并给出该现象的原因。我们应该这样来构造全文：第一段描述图画；第二段发表自己对图画的看法；第三段给出该现象的原因；第四段下结论，简要提出解决问题的办法。经过学习之后，大家就会知道这是一个极为重要的模式，请大家用心掌握。
Sample：
As is depicted by the two pictures； a sharp contrast is shaped between the parents and the son。 In the left drawing； the parents are working hard in the field； bending over and sweating heavily。 Near them is a basket with very simple food in it。 However； in the right drawing； their son is squandering the money on luxurious food and chatting on mobile phone。
How pitiful the parents are！ They spare no efforts to earn money in order to support their son’s study and life in university。 They seem to be willing to do everything that is helpful to their beloved son。 But； in return； the son spends the money as he likes without knowing how hard his parents work for it and how he should use it to better prepare himself for future career。
In my opinion； the reasons for this phenomenon e down to one essential point—failure of both family and school education。 For one thing； quite a lot of Chinese parents spoil their children。 All parents’ love for children is the same； but different is the way of showing it。 Many parents hope too much that their children will have a bright future； which； in their eyes； means key universities； hot majors； good salaries and so on。 So they try their best to satisfy the children’s demands instead of teaching them to struggle for future with their own hands。 For another； centered on exam marks； the school education also fails； to a large extent； to impart moral standards to the children； especially the conception of selfreliance and hard struggle。
In a word； to change the phenomenon described by the above pictures； a reform in our current education system is not only necessary but urgent。
点评：
第一段的重点是在描述时突出两幅图画之间强烈的反差，所以这里专门加上了第一句话。这一段在用词上也很考究。第二段强烈地表达了自己的感想。首句使用了感叹句。而后先说父母竭尽全力挣钱供孩子读书，后说孩子不知父母辛苦，不懂得如何正确利用父母的血汗钱。第三段给出了该现象的原因——家庭和学校教育的失败，而后分为两方面来说，结构极为清晰。最后一段只有一句话，掷地有声——要想改变现状，只能改革当前的教育体系。
心得：
全文一气呵成，读来倍感畅快。从描述图画，到发表评论，到给出原因，再到解决办法，可谓浑然一体。既有全局的考虑，又有细微处语言的运用，该文值得大家细细品味。
Directions 2
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the picture； and
2。 point out the reasons why more and more foreigners like to live in China。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
《西湖晨景》该题目非常简洁，在提纲中已给出文章的主题，即越来越多的外国人喜爱在中国生活——在描述图画后，给出原因即可。
Sample：
What an attractive scene it is！ On such a peaceful and beautiful morning by West Lake； a middleaged foreigner is jogging—he is enjoying the fresh air； cool breeze and charming scenery。 From this picture； we can see clearly that the foreigner enjoys life in this Chinese city； Hangzhou。
As a matter of fact； in the past few years； more and more foreigners have chosen to live in China。 Some work here； some pursue their study in universities and even some join volunteer activities in China。 The reasons why more and more foreigners like to live in China can be listed as follows。 To begin with； since China’s reform and openingup in 1978； our country has witnessed great progress in nearly all aspects of the society； especially in economy； which provides a far better environment of working； investing and studying for foreigners。 Second； economic globalization has made cultural blending possible and necessary。 Foreigners have e to know more and more about Chinese culture and bee influenced by it； which has formed the important basis of their living in China。 Last but not the least； it is obvious that with every effort we have made in environmental protection； our country has bee a place more and more suitable and pleasant to live in。
In my opinion； the arrival of foreigners brings more chances and opportunities of economic development。 So why not seize such chances to embrace our bright future？
点评：
第一段描述图画。这一段写得非常精彩，先以感叹句开头，而后描述图画，最后小结——这位外国人喜爱在杭州的生活。
第二段前两句总结了外国人来我国的现象。第三句是原因类的模板句，而后分三点来说：第一点是说改革开放后我国经济发展迅速，给外国人提供了很好的工作、投资和学习环境；第二点是说经济全球化促进文化融合——外国人对中国文化了解更多，这构成了他们在中国生活的重要基础；第三点是说环境保护效果显著，居住条件自然改善了。
最后一段说外国人的到来带到了更多的经济发展的机会，所以为什么不抓住这些机会来拥抱我们美好的明天呢？
心得：
要写出好文章，首先要对文章的基本结构非常熟悉，而后再做出一些变化，这些变化通常就是亮点。比如第一段先使用了一个感叹句，立即吸引了读者的注意力。第三段第二句使用了反问句，效果非常强烈。
Directions 3
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the drawing；
2。 analyze the reasons why it is difficult for university graduates to find a job； and
3。 point out the possible ways to solve the problem。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
《招员工七名》 这篇文章关注的是当前重要的就业难问题。它的要求非常明确，在描述图画后，先给出原因，再给出解决办法，这是非常常见的文章模式。
Sample：
The recruiting fair in the above drawing is filled with young graduates each holding a pile of resumes in their hands。 Around a desk in the front of the drawing； there are dozens of students waiting to hand in